SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga II · The Call · Arc 5 · The Compost Fields

Chapter 69

Nothing To Take
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, dawn at the root gate.

Through the falling curtain of soil slides a ship built to cross earth: an iron-hulled sled-ship on long iron runners, white sails, a white Bastion flag. It glides out onto the Compost Fields and hisses to a stop on the loam.

P2MID, its deck.

The Twin Clerks, both hands bandaged from the nettle, unrolling a fresh scroll. Cleaners loading sacks of white salt onto low iron sleds, grey hounds harnessed in front. And at the bow, standing on a plate of iron, a broad, hooded figure: a body of cracked white salt with light glowing in the cracks, iron soles on his boots, a long iron branding iron in his one good fist. Older scars than last time: a shoulder re-crusted, an arm grown back lumpy.

SALTBRAND · K-III TESTED · Scalelist #3,870 · Bastion Four

P3CLOSE, the rail, a little apart from everyone.

A barefoot man sits on it with his hands open in his lap, palms up, as if he's waiting for someone to put something in them.

PAGE 2
P4CLOSE, a brass lectern

bolted to the deck, a heavy book open on it. Its pages glow, and above them a projection flickers up: Architect Ten, Aldhrun Vesparid. Broad as a door, grey-bearded, his face a map of scars over scars, a Registry collar buttoned to the throat, ink on one cuff, and eyes that haven't slept properly since a thief robbed his Archive.

ALDHRUN
The Trinity comes back when it dies. And Trinity is where it comes back.
ALDHRUN
So salt Trinity. After that, its next death is its last, however it comes.
P5CLOSE, Saltbrand

slow and dry, as if every word costs him water.

SALTBRAND
He's too exact to burn. I learned that on a slipway.
SALTBRAND
So I'll burn the ground he comes back through.
P6CLOSE, the projection turning to the barefoot man on the rail.
ALDHRUN
And you. The coat with the shards. And the captain, if he'll come.
THE BAREFOOT MANpolitely
I can't keep either of them, sir.
ALDHRUN
I know. That's why I'm sending you.
PAGE 3
P7WIDE, Mosscap.

On the hill, the Marka lies beached on the soil, the crew on deck in the soft rain, all turning to look at the white sails at the gate. Below the hill, Röta stands among her mushroom folk, very still.

P8CLOSE, the Twin Clerks

at the sled-ship's bow, reading together, fast and loud:

FOUR-ELEVEN
"By decree of the Null Protocol, under the hand of Architect Two: the rain of—"
FOUR-TWELVE
"—the Compost Fields."
P9WIDE.

The rain greys in mid-air. Every falling drop across the whole sky goes colourless, then isn't there at all. The sky goes silent. For the first time in ten thousand years, nothing is falling on the Compost Fields.

Far off, from the foot of the hill, a single scream: Röta's.

PAGE 4
P10ACTION.

The Cleaners fan out across the drying soil with their sleds, pouring salt from the sacks in long, straight, ruler-perfect lines. Lines that cross. Lines that box the fields into squares.

P11CLOSE.

Saltbrand steps off the sled-ship's plate onto an iron salt-sled, never touching the soil, and lowers the head of his branding iron to the end of a line.

FSSSSSHHHK
PAGES 5–6 — SPLASH
P12SPLASH (double page). THE LEDGER RULED OVER THE EARTH.

White salt-fire races along every line at once, from horizon to horizon, a perfect grid of burning white over the black and living earth, like ruled paper laid across the world. Where it passes, the soil goes dead white. Mushroom forests crumble to salt where they stand. The sky above is dry and empty and silent.

Small on its hill, the Marka. Along her rail, the crew, lit white from below.

VIGOLAS
…They're turning the whole world into a ledger.
SMURJAN
No. Into a grave. Wherever that fire's been, nothing comes back.
PAGE 7
P13ACTION.

Vigolas vaults the rail, green lightning blazing up both arms, and charges down the hill across the black squares between the burning lines. Behind him, Rougeina, Kompis and Mingus, Smurjan.

VIGOLAS
Drekk, keep her off the white! Everyone else, with me!
P14MID.

In his path, the barefoot man has simply… arrived. He's standing on the soil between two lines of white fire, palms open. A plain grey shirt too big for him. Trousers whose pockets hang turned inside out, like two little white flags. Hair cropped short by somebody else's hand. A calm, plain face.

____ · K-III TESTED · Scalelist #5,040 · Bastion Four

PAGE 8
P15CLOSE, Vigolas's eyes

thin gold rings coming up in the emerald: Greed-sight.

P16GREED-SIGHT POV.

The world by value. The soil glows faintly. The salt sleds glow a cold, hard white. Saltbrand on his sled burns like a lamp. Behind him, his crew blazes gold, all of them, worth everything. And in front of him, where the barefoot man stands: a man-shaped hole. Grey. Nothing at all. As if someone had cut a person out of the picture with scissors.

VIGOLAS
…Where'd you go?
THE BAREFOOT MANfrom inside the hole, polite
I'm right here.
PAGE 9
P17ACTION.

Rougeina Swaps in from his left, blink, eight blades closing in a ring. The barefoot man catches one by its flat in mid-swing, plucks it from her hand, turns it, and presses it back into her palm, point-first, so the tip rests against her own throat.

THE BAREFOOT MAN
Here. Yours.
P18CLOSE, Rougeina

perfectly still with her own blade at her own throat. Her eyes flick to his plate: Bastion Four. A flicker in her face that nobody else could read. Then blink: she's gone, three metres back.

ROUGEINA
…He gave it back.
ROUGEINAthinking
…Four.
PAGE 10
P19ACTION.

Vigolas throws out his open hand and closes it.

VIGOLAS
COMPACT!
P20ACTION.

Space folds around the barefoot man: soil, air, drifting salt-ash, all creasing inward along lines of green light, shrinking to a cube that drops into Vigolas's palm. And the barefoot man is still standing exactly where he was, untouched, outside it. Vigolas stares at the cube: a fistful of dirt and air.

P21CLOSE, the barefoot man.
THE BAREFOOT MAN
You can't take from a man who has nothing, Captain.
PAGE 11
P22ACTION.

Vigolas swings: Emerald Knuckle, full charge. The barefoot man doesn't block it. He takes the fist in an open hand, turns with it, and gives the whole punch back: Vigolas's own weight and momentum swung round into Vigolas's own jaw.

KRAK
P23ACTION, a run of small panels.

Vigolas swings again; it comes back to him. A kick, given back. A shoulder-charge, given back. A green burst of lightning, caught by the wrist and handed back into the soil at his own feet, throwing him.

THE BAREFOOT MAN
Here. And here. And that's yours as well.
PAGE 12
P24WIDE.

Vigolas on his back in the black soil, bleeding from the mouth, dazed. The barefoot man stands over him, palms open, not even breathing hard.

THE BAREFOOT MAN
Everything I ever had, someone took. My house. My mother's ring. My name.
THE BAREFOOT MAN
So I gave the rest away first. You can't rob an empty house.
P25CLOSE, behind them:

a line of white salt-fire burning across the soil, straight toward the fallen captain. Fast.

PAGE 13
P26ACTION.

Smurjan steps between the fire and Vigolas. Third eye open, crimson-rimmed, reading every flame for a gap. There is no gap. A wall of white.

KALIfrom his shadow, shrieking
Don't you DARE die in that, we don't come back from that, we DON'T—
P27ACTION.

Blink: Rougeina Swaps to Vigolas's side, grabs his collar, blink, and both of them are twenty metres away on clean black soil.

P28ACTION.

The salt-fire reaches Smurjan. And a heartbeat before it touches him, the soil beneath his feet opens like a mouth and swallows him whole. The white fire roars over an empty hole, and the hole closes after it.

PAGE 14
P29MID.

The barefoot man looks at where Smurjan was. Then at Vigolas, in Rougeina's grip, spitting soil. Then he turns and walks away across the dry fields toward the sled-ship.

THE BAREFOOT MAN
Not today. If I took the coat now, I'd have to give it away by tomorrow.
THE BAREFOOT MAN
I'll take it on the day I need to.
P30CLOSE, Vigolas

up on one elbow, furious, blood on his teeth.

VIGOLAS
Who ARE you?!
THE BAREFOOT MANnot looking back
No one.
FOUR-ELEVENdistant, on the sled-ship, calling after him
Ingen! The sled!
PAGE 15
P31WIDE, dusk at Mosscap.

The salt lines have burned out to white scars across the fields. The crew is back on the Marka, battered. Beside the hull, the soil heaves, and Smurjan climbs up out of the earth again, streaming loam.

P32CLOSE, Smurjan's collarbone

where his robe has torn: a little ring of tiny white mushrooms has grown there, like a necklace. The moss in his braid is thicker.

KOMPIS
Hey. Hey. You okay?
SMURJAN
I'm fine.
P33CLOSE, Kali

half out of the shadow, staring at him.

KALI
…What did you say?
SMURJAN
I said I'm f—
P34CLOSE, Smurjan.

His mouth stops. He's reaching for a word, the way you reach for a stair in the dark, and the stair isn't there.

SMURJAN
…I. I'm— I—
KALI
Say we.
KALI
Say we. SAY IT.
PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P35CLOSE, Smurjan

very quiet.

SMURJAN
…I can't find it.
P36LUST-SIGHT POV, Kompis.

Smurjan's gold threads to the crew, all of them, are thinner than this morning. The brown root-thread from his chest is thick as a mooring rope now, and pulling down.

P37WIDE, night, under a silent sky.

No rain. Smurjan stands alone at the rail, looking down at the soil. Vigolas comes and leans beside him, a bruise darkening on his jaw.

SMURJAN
She's pruning me. Every time I come back, there's a little less of you in me. And a little more of her.
VIGOLAS
Then stop dying.
SMURJAN
I'm going down to her.
P38FINAL PANEL.

Below the hull, the soil opens like a door: roots folding back on either side, and a stair of living roots spiralling down into a warm brown dark, lit faintly gold from somewhere far below. Smurjan steps up onto the rail.

END OF CHAPTER 69

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