SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 1 · Katriel

Chapter 77

The Dead Column
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, a village in Trinity, dawn.

Three of everything: three suns rising in a void-black sky, three roads into a square, a house with three doors. The Marka is moored at a black stone quay beyond the rooftops.

P2MID, the square.

A cracked Scalelist board on a pole, the familiar columns of names and numbers. A crowd of Trinity villagers stands staring at it in silence.

P3CLOSE, the board.

On its right-hand edge, where the stone was blank yesterday, a new column has carved itself in hard square letters. Its heading reads: THE DEAD.

Arena Rule Five: the Arena may call the dead. Now every board keeps count of them.
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P4CLOSE, the column.

Names and numbers, like any other ranking: SIGVAT · K-IV SHAPED · THE DEAD · #1,877 and OLD TORBJÖRN · #— and thousands more. And the numbers are moving, slowly, the way the living ones do after a fight.

P5MID, the crew

walking into the square: Vigolas yawning, Drekk in his bell-rope mask, Kompis with Mingus, Rougeina on a rooftop, Trollmage asleep on his feet, and Smurjan, freshly back from the Arena, his skin a shade greyer, walking a half-step slower than he used to.

P6CLOSE, Smurjan

looking at the board. He reaches out and touches one name in the Dead column: OLD TORBJÖRN. His hand stays there.

SMURJAN
…He's ranked now. He'd hate that.
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P7CLOSE, Kali

rising out of his shadow, one-armed, unusually quiet.

KALI
He'd have said it was rude. Numbering a ferryman.
P8CLOSE, Vigolas

squinting at the column.

VIGOLAS
Wait. The dead can fight now. And they've got numbers. So somebody's going to start ranking dead people against living people—
TROLLMAGEeyes closed, asleep, mumbling
…war…
VIGOLAS
Yeah. That.
PAGE 4
P9WIDE, the Marka's deck, midday.

Repairs after the Compost Fields: Drekk splicing rigging by feel, Rougeina sharpening her eight blades in order, Trollmage asleep in a coil of rope banking heartbeats, Vigolas practising a bowline (still badly).

P10CLOSE, Kompis

at the binnacle by the wheel, polishing the brass dome over the ship's compass with his sleeve, Mingus sitting on his feet.

KOMPISto the binnacle
You've done enough spinning lately. Behave.
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P11CLOSE, the brass dome.

In the curved, polished brass, Kompis's reflection: hood, beard, lake-weed. Then the reflection isn't his.

P12CLOSE, the brass.

A woman's face looks out of it: silver-white hair in a high crown braid, beautiful, ageless. As we watch, it changes: an old man, a girl, a soldier, a stranger, a stranger, all in the same frame, never settling.

P13CLOSE, Kompis

freezing, the cloth in his hand.

KOMPIS
…Vig?
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P14CLOSE, the face in the brass

settling for a moment on the silver-haired woman. She smiles kindly, the way a teacher smiles at a mistake.

THE FACE
Kompis. Asset. K-II, Lust, assigned at my desk when you were eight.
THE FACE
I'd like it back.
P15ACTION.

A slender hand reaches out of the brass: real fingers, cool and silver-ringed, holding a quill of clear crystal. The quill's tip touches the inside of Kompis's left wrist, where his golden sin-mark is.

PAGES 7–8 — SPLASH
P16SPLASH (double page). RECAST.

The sin-mark peels off. Like a stencil lifted from wet paint, the small golden knot comes off Kompis's skin in one piece and unspools into a ribbon of gold light as long as the deck: every thread he has ever seen, every gun-soul he has ever heard, pulled out of him in a single shining strand.

Kompis is flung back off his feet with his mouth open in a soundless scream. Mingus is barking, the crew is running, Vigolas is leaping with green lightning on his fist, and the gold ribbon whips back into the brass and is gone.

The face in the binnacle smiles once, and becomes a stranger, and then just brass.

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P17WIDE.

Silence. The crew around Kompis on the deck. Vigolas's lightning-fist is buried in the binnacle; he punched it flat, too late.

P18CLOSE, Kompis's wrist.

Where the golden knot was: bare skin. Nothing. Not even a scar.

PAGE 10
P19CLOSE, Kompis

sitting up, looking at the crew. His brown eyes are just brown. No gold film. And around the crew, where there have always been threads, nothing. Just people.

KOMPISquietly
…I can't see you.
VIGOLAS
I'm right here, buddy.
KOMPIS
No. I mean I can't see you. The threads. They're gone. All of them.
P20CLOSE, Mingus

pressing against him, whining.

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P21CLOSE, Kompis

putting a hand on Mingus's chest. He feels the heartbeat, ba-dum, strong and warm, right under his palm. Along the bottom of the panel, where the golden pulse line should spring to life… nothing.

KOMPISeyes going grey, trying
…Subtick.

(The world stays in colour.)

P22CLOSE, Kompis

his eyes clearing back to brown. Nothing happened.

KOMPIS
…It's not the dog. It's me. There's nothing in me to do it with.
PAGE 12
P23CLOSE, Trollmage

wide awake now, flipping through his Codex fast.

TROLLMAGE
A crown braid. A crystal quill. A face that won't stay still. That's an Architect. That's Six. Katriel. The Keeper of Sin Assignment.
TROLLMAGE
Most people's first sin comes off her desk. She gave him Lust when he was a child, so she can take it back.
P24CLOSE, Rougeina

very still on the rail.

ROUGEINA
Katriel's the next name on my list.
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P25CLOSE, Smurjan.
SMURJAN
Can she take ours?
TROLLMAGE
Yours and mine, no. A sin a Codex has written into you belongs to the book, not the desk. She can't peel that. · Rougeina's Pride is sealed. Unread. That she can.
P26CLOSE, Vigolas.
VIGOLAS
And me?
TROLLMAGE
The board never gave you one. There's nothing on you to take.
VIGOLAS
Ha! Finally, not being counted pays off.
PAGE 14
P27CLOSE, Kompis

unbuckling his holster, lifting out Lilla Ulv. Holding the short wolf-engraved pistol in both hands the way he always does when he talks to her.

KOMPIS
Hey, little one. It's okay. We'll figure it out.
P28CLOSE, the pistol

in his hands. Silent. Just steel.

PAGE 15
P29CLOSE, Kompis

waiting for the little yip, the soul-text balloon, the cub chasing its tail inside the steel.

KOMPIS
…Little one?
P30CLOSE, Kompis's face.

Nothing comes. He holds the gun up to his ear, like a shell.

PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P31CUTAWAY, inside the steel, drawn the way only Kompis has ever been able to see it.

The wolf cub, curled in the dark of the barrel, ears flat, yipping and yipping and crying, pawing at the inside of the metal toward the man holding her.

LILLA ULVsoul-text, wobbly, unheard
kompis? kompis i'm here. i'm right here. can you hear me? KOMPIS—
P32FINAL PANEL, wide, the deck.

Kompis sits holding a silent pistol against his ear, the dog pressed to his side, the crew standing around him, and he can't hear a thing.

END OF CHAPTER 77

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.