SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 1 · Katriel

Chapter 78

Author Of Character
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Marka

sailing out of Trinity on a void-black sea under three suns. Every hand on deck looks over their shoulder at anything shiny.

P2MID, the crew at the galley table

a council of war over cold porridge. Trollmage's Codex lies open in the middle.

TROLLMAGE
She signs her letters "K. Bregnveld, Author of Character." Her desk assigns most people's first sin. That's the first injustice in most lives: somebody else deciding who you'll become.
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P3CLOSE, Kompis

holding his bare wrist, Mingus's head in his lap. Lilla Ulv lies on the table in front of him.

KOMPIS
How do I get it back?
TROLLMAGE
Her office gave it. Her office holds it. Break her tool and it has nowhere to stay.
VIGOLAS
Her tool?
TROLLMAGE
Mirrors. Anything that shows a face.
P4WIDE.

Every eye at the table slowly turns to the ship's polished things: the brass Kettle's bell, the brass lamps, the water barrels, eight steel blades on Rougeina's back, the glass of the lantern.

VIGOLAS
…Oh, great.
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P5CLOSE, Rougeina.
ROUGEINA
She took his Lust because it came off her desk. What else did?
TROLLMAGE
Mine's written into me by the Codex. Smurjan's too, since the lightning. She can't peel those.
TROLLMAGEcarefully
Your Pride is sealed. Unread. That she can take. Or worse: she can leave it in you and aim it wrong.
P6CLOSE, Rougeina

very still. Her hand goes to the silver ring on her wrist.

PAGE 4
P7MID, Kali

coming up from the hold with bowls stacked on her one arm, a pot of stew balanced on her hip. She sets them out on the table: one, two, three… four.

P8CLOSE, the four bowls

side by side in front of Smurjan's place.

P9CLOSE, Smurjan

looking at them, then up at her.

SMURJAN
Kali. There are three of us.
KALI
…I know.
KALI
I know. I always do that. Every time. My whole life.
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P10CLOSE, Kali

staring at the fourth bowl as if it has insulted her.

KALI
It just feels like somebody's late.
P11CLOSE, Bakasura's small eyes

rising for a moment from Smurjan's shadow, looking at the fourth bowl. He doesn't eat it, though he could.

PAGE 6
P12NIGHT. The deck.

Calm. Drekk at the wheel in his bell-rope mask. Kompis on watch, sinless, rifle-less, with Lilla Ulv silent at his hip and Mingus asleep on his feet.

P13CLOSE, the Kettle's bell

at the bow, gleaming in the lantern light. In its brass curve, the reflected deck ripples, like water when a stone goes in.

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P14ACTION.

Out of the bell steps a figure in a white robe, its face hidden behind a mask of polished silver: a perfect mirror, featureless. Out of the water barrel, another. Out of the lantern glass, a third. Out of the blades on Rougeina's back, while she sleeps, a fourth and a fifth.

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P15CLOSE, Kompis

on his feet.

KOMPIS
WAKE UP! EVERYBODY UP!
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P16ACTION.

Vigolas bursts up the ladder, green lightning on both fists, and punches the nearest Ward. The Ward's mirror-mask catches the lightning and throws it back. Vigolas eats his own punch and goes skidding across the deck.

VIGOLAS
OW! That's— that was mine!
P17ACTION.

Smurjan opens his third eye and draws the Sightline. A Ward turns its mirror-face toward him, and the crimson line reflects straight back into Smurjan's own forehead. He staggers.

PAGES 9–10 — SPLASH
P18SPLASH (double page). EVERY POWER COMES BACK.

Chaos on the moonlit deck. Every power the crew throws comes back:

Rougeina Swaps toward a Ward and lands in its mirror-mask's reflection, Swapped straight back to where she started.

Trollmage's half-written MACRO bounces off a mask, and a hundred tiny violet sneezes erupt from Trollmage himself.

Kali borrows a Ward's own mirror-trick, and its mask throws her borrowing back so she borrows herself and goes cross-eyed.

Bakasura bites a Ward and spits out a mouthful of his own teeth's reflection.

In the middle of it all, the only one fighting cleanly is Kompis: sinless, powerless, swinging a bucket, with Mingus hanging off a Ward's robe by the teeth.

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P19ACTION.

Kompis brings the bucket down on a Ward's mirror-mask, CRACK, and the mask spiders. The Ward staggers. Nothing reflects. There was no power to throw back.

P20CLOSE, Kompis

panting, realising.

KOMPIS
…They can't throw back what I haven't got.
KOMPISshouting
STOP USING YOUR POWERS! HIT THEM WITH THINGS!
PAGE 12
P21ACTION, a run of panels.

The crew switches tactics:

Vigolas picks up a barrel and throws it.

Drekk swings his axe by feel, with no power at all, thunk.

Rougeina fights with blades only, no Swap, all dancer's footwork.

Smurjan's open palm, with no Sightline, shatters a mask.

Trollmage sits on one.

P22WIDE.

The Wards melt back into the reflections they came from: bell, barrel, lantern, blade. Cracked masks drip mercury onto the deck.

PAGE 13
P23CLOSE, Vigolas

sitting on the deck, rubbing his own singed jaw.

VIGOLAS
Got hit by my own punch. That's a first.
KOMPIS
How was it?
VIGOLAS
…Honestly? Great punch.
P24CLOSE, Kompis

looking at the bucket in his hands, then at the crew, all of them bruised and grinning.

KOMPISquietly
You know what's weird? I can't see the threads. Not one.
KOMPIS
And I still know exactly who'd die for who on this deck.
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P25MID, later.

The crew asleep again in a pile of blankets near the mast, one person on watch: Rougeina, blades across her knees, every reflective surface on deck covered with sailcloth.

P26CLOSE, Kali

asleep against Smurjan's side, mouth open, snoring. Her one hand curled around the handle of the fourth bowl, which she brought to bed without noticing.

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P27WIDE, the black sea off the bow.

Perfectly still water. In it, the reflection of the Marka, upside down, every mast and rope.

P28CLOSE, the reflection.

Standing on the reflected deck, inside the water, upside down, is a figure: slight, wiry, a long black braid hanging up toward the surface. It's looking at the reflected Kali, asleep.

PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P29CLOSE, Rougeina

on watch, glancing at the water, frowning. She sees the reflected ship. She doesn't see the figure, because there's nothing above the water for it to be the reflection of.

P30FINAL PANEL, the water, close.

The black-braided figure in the reflection lifts one hand toward the sleeping Kali, almost tenderly. Behind it, where its own reflection should be, there's nothing. It casts no reflection at all.

THE FIGUREa soft voice, mirrored text, readable only backwards
…ɿɘtƨiƨ
END OF CHAPTER 78

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.