SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 1 · Katriel

Chapter 79

Bali
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, dawn.

The Marka on a calm sea. Every mirror, lamp-glass and barrel-top on deck is wrapped in sailcloth. Rougeina sits on the bow, blades across her knees, eyes red from no sleep.

P2CLOSE, the Kettle's bell

the one brass thing they didn't wrap. Nobody wraps the bell. It gleams.

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P3CLOSE, the bell's brass.

It ripples. Not like the Wards: slower, gentler, the way water ripples when someone steps into it carefully, not wanting to wake anyone.

P4FULL FIGURE.

He steps out of the bell onto the bow: a young man the exact height and build of Kali. Wiry, ash-grey skin with a sheen like polished metal. A long black braid. Red war-markings on the other cheek from hers. Eyes like polished steel: you see yourself in them instead of his pupils. A long coat of overlapping mirror-steel scales, glittering like a shoal of fish. Barefoot. Twin sickles of mirror-steel at his hips.

BALI · K-IV SHAPED · Scalelist: — (no reflection to count)

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P5CLOSE, Rougeina

on her feet, blades up.

ROUGEINA
Who are you?
P6CLOSE, Bali.

He looks at her with something like sympathy. When he speaks, the voice that comes out of his mouth isn't his: a woman's voice, warm, gentle, the way you'd wake a child.

BALIa woman's voice
"Little storm."
P7CLOSE, Rougeina.

She goes white. Her blades dip an inch.

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P8CLOSE, Bali

and now the voice is his own: soft, slow, Kali's voice with every edge sanded off.

BALI
…She sends her love. She'd come herself, but she can't. Not yet.
P9CLOSE, Rougeina

her voice cracking.

ROUGEINA
Who sends— who is she—
P10CLOSE, Bali

already looking past her, toward the mast, where the crew is scrambling up from their blankets.

BALI
That's not mine to say. I'm not here for you.
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P11WIDE.

The crew on deck: Vigolas, Kompis, Trollmage, Drekk in his mask, and Smurjan at the mast. Out of Smurjan's shadow rises Kali, one-armed, black-glass sickle up, hair wild from sleep, red braid swinging.

KALI
Who's yelling at this hour? Some of us are— (she stops)
P12CLOSE, Kali

staring at Bali. Bali staring back. Two faces, one red-braided and one black, the markings on opposite cheeks. Mirror images.

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P13CLOSE, Bali

a small, aching smile.

BALI
Sister.
P14CLOSE, Kali.

For once in her life she has nothing to say.

P15CLOSE, Smurjan

third eye snapping open, and his voice is hard:

SMURJAN
Get away from her.
PAGE 7
P16ACTION.

Smurjan walks the Sightline: a crimson line from his third eye to the exact point of Bali's chest. One step, two—

P17ACTION.

Bali doesn't move. The crimson line hits the polished sheen of his skin and comes back, folding along itself, and lands on Smurjan's own forehead, exactly where the third eye is. Smurjan reels backwards into the mast.

BALIgently
I'm sorry. It's what I do. I give things back.
PAGES 8–9 — THE CLASH
P18ACTION, a run of fast panels.

Everything comes back.

Rougeina Swaps toward him, and arrives exactly where she left, Swapped back, staggering.

Vigolas swings an Emerald Knuckle, and the lightning returns along his own arm and sends him tumbling across the deck. "Why does everybody do THAT to me now?!"

Trollmage, with nothing banked, throws a pocket Rune of Wind, and it comes back and blows his own hat into the sea.

Kompis, sinless, has nothing to send, so he swings a fist. It connects: Bali takes it on the jaw and blinks. Nothing to return.

P19CLOSE, Bali

rubbing his jaw, almost amused.

BALI
…You're empty. She took yours. Katriel. I'm sorry. That one wasn't me.
PAGE 10
P20ACTION.

Kali comes in fast, one-armed, black-glass sickle flashing. Bali draws his twin mirror-sickles, and they meet. CLANG.

P21ACTION.

The fight between them is perfect. Every move she makes, he makes in mirror: her overhead cut meets his overhead cut, her feint meets his feint. It's like watching someone fight their reflection, except the reflection has two arms and she has one.

PAGE 11
P22CLOSE, Kali

snarling, and she does the thing she always does: she borrows. Her eyes flash silver as she breathes in his Pride—

P23CLOSE, Bali

gently, as the silver lifts off him toward her:

BALI
No, sister. That one's mine.

The silver comes back. Out of her eyes, into his. Borrowed and returned in one breath.

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P24ACTION.

Bali hooks her sickle with his and pulls her toward the bell. The brass ripples like water. He steps backwards into it, up to his shoulders, still holding her, and pulls. Kali's one hand is already inside the brass up to the wrist.

P25CLOSE, the crew

scrambling: Vigolas diving, Smurjan up from the mast, Rougeina Swapping—

PAGES 13–14 — SPLASH
P26SPLASH (double page). THE TWINS.

Half in, half out of the Kettle's bell, face to face, almost touching: Kali and Bali. Red braid and black braid. Her face, his face, the same face. The brass surface of the bell rings out around them in silver ripples, and inside the bell, in the reflection, we can see where he wants to take her: a vast silver room of mirrors, endless, quiet, cold.

And in the sheen of Bali's cheek, inches from her eyes, Kali sees her own face reflected, and she doesn't let go.

KALIvery small
…I set four bowls.
KALI
My whole life. Every night. Four bowls.
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P27CLOSE, Bali

his steel eyes wet.

BALI
I know. I watched you do it. From inside every spoon.
BALI
We broke off the same crack. We're the same piece. You've been living in a body that isn't ours.
P28CLOSE, Kali

torn, her hand still in his.

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P29ACTION.

Mingus lunges, a golden blur, and grabs the hem of Kali's tunic in his teeth and pulls. Not a form. Just a dog, eighty pounds, digging in. And then Smurjan has her by the shoulder, and Vigolas has Smurjan by the belt.

P30WIDE.

The tug of war tips. Kali comes out of the brass. Bali lets go, gently, rather than tear her.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P31CLOSE, Bali

sinking back into the bell, only his face left in the brass now, soft and sad.

BALI
When you're ready, sister. Not before. I'll wait. I'm good at waiting. I've had a long time to practise.

(The brass goes still. He's gone.)

P32FINAL PANEL, the deck.

Kali on her knees, breathing hard, Smurjan's hand on her shoulder. Behind them, the morning sun throws Smurjan's shadows across the planks: his own, Kali's, Bakasura's… and for one panel, faint as breath, a fourth, with a long braid, turned toward the bell. Then it's gone.

END OF CHAPTER 79

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.