SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 1 · Katriel

Chapter 82

Recast
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the octagon.

The crew spreads out across the mirrored floor. The seven sin-shapes turn slowly overhead. Katriel doesn't stand up. She dips her crystal quill in an inkwell of liquid light.

KATRIEL
Let's see. A pirate the board can't count. A dog-man I already emptied. A lazy half-breed. Three souls in one body. A nettle that isn't on my books.
KATRIELlooking at Rougeina, smiling
And my best work.
P2CLOSE, Rougeina

blades up.

ROUGEINA
I'm not your work.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Katriel

writing a line in her ledger without looking.

KATRIEL
Rougeina. Astralis. Pride, primary. Sealed. I remember signing you. You were four. You stood very straight. I thought: placement. That one will always know where she belongs.
KATRIEL
Then you spent your life proving me wrong. It's rather sweet.
P4CLOSE, Rougeina's wrist.

The cold silver ring of her Pride-mark tightens, like a hand closing.

PAGE 3
P5ACTION.

Rougeina Swaps, aiming at a mirror-shard behind Katriel's desk.

P6ACTION.

She arrives inside a Mirror-Ward's reflection in the wall, between two panes of glass, crushed, blades jammed, gasping, and the reflection spits her out onto the floor at Katriel's feet.

KATRIEL
I didn't take your Pride, darling. It's still yours. I just turned it round.
PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Katriel

explaining, almost kindly.

KATRIEL
Pride is placement: everything in its place. Now it puts you in the worst place. Every time.
P8ACTION.

Rougeina Swaps again, desperate, toward Vigolas's side. She lands in front of a Ward's silver baton, mid-swing. CRACK. She goes down.

PAGE 5
P9ACTION.

Smurjan comes at the desk, third eye open. Katriel raises her quill, the tip glowing, and reaches toward the crimson line across his forehead to peel his Wrath like a stencil.

P10CLOSE, the quill-tip

against the crimson script on Smurjan's skin. It won't lift. The quill scratches and slides off, like a pen on glass. The script just glows brighter.

PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Katriel

frowning. Actually frowning.

KATRIEL
…Hm.
P12CLOSE, Smurjan

the open palm stopping an inch from the desk because a Ward has thrown itself in the way.

SMURJAN
It's written. By the book. On us. It doesn't come off.
P13CLOSE, Trollmage

asleep on Drekk's back, mumbling.

TROLLMAGE
…Second Hard Law… the book wins… nyeh…
PAGE 7
P14CLOSE, Katriel

turning her quill toward Trollmage's hand: the violet hourglass of his Sloth. She tries. The quill slides off that too.

KATRIEL
Codex-written. Both of you. How tiresome.
KATRIELflicking her quill at the pirate
And you, I never signed at all.
P15CLOSE, Vigolas

grinning, bouncing on his toes.

VIGOLAS
Nope! Nothing to take! Come on, then! Hit me with the pen!
PAGE 8
P16CLOSE, Katriel

smiling again, slowly, the face shifting to a stranger's.

KATRIEL
I don't need to take anything from you, captain. I only need to give something to someone else.
P17ACTION.

She dips her quill into the gold sin-shape hovering above her: the golden knot. Kompis's Lust, held in her office since ch. 77. The quill drips gold.

PAGES 9–10 — SPLASH
P18SPLASH (double page). RECAST.

Katriel flicks the golden quill at the largest Mirror-Ward in the room. The gold sin flies across the octagon as a ribbon of light and slams into the Ward's chest.

The Ward's silver mask fills with gold. Its eyes behind the mirror film over, gold, Lust-sight, Kompis's Lust. It sees threads: golden lines blaze out across the whole octagon, binding the crew together, every bond and love and fear drawn in light. And the Ward turns its gold-filled mask toward the brightest thread of all: the one between Kompis and Mingus.

KATRIELoff-panel
Every power in his hands, and none of the love. Let's see how he likes being read.
PAGE 11
P19ACTION.

The Ward moves with Kompis's precision, the precision of a man who reads people. It finds every gap. It knows where Vigolas will step before he steps, which crewmate Smurjan will protect, and that Drekk can't see his left side.

P20ACTION.

It tugs on a thread, Kompis's own Thread-Pull, and Drekk turns toward Smurjan with his axe raised, pulled by the old grief, before he catches himself, shaking.

DREKKthrough the mask
…No. No. Not again.
PAGE 12
P21CLOSE, Kompis

watching his own power used on his friends, white with fury and helplessness.

KOMPIS
That's mine. That's mine, you can't—
P22ACTION.

The gold-masked Ward reaches for the thread between Kompis and Mingus, and pulls. Mingus whines, a terrible sound, as the thread tugs him toward the Ward.

PAGE 13
P23ACTION.

Kompis, sinless, throws himself on the Ward bare-handed, tackling it to the mirror floor. No powers, no shot, just a man and his dog's thread.

KOMPIS
LET HIM GO!
P24ACTION.

Mingus, released, bites the Ward's robe and pulls it off its feet. Just a dog, no form, all fury.

PAGE 14
P25WIDE, the octagon.

The crew is losing. Rougeina is down, bleeding, and every Swap puts her somewhere worse. Smurjan is wading through Wards. Vigolas is getting slammed by his own reflected lightning every time he forgets. Kompis is wrestling his own stolen soul-sight on the floor.

P26CLOSE, Katriel

writing calmly in her ledger.

KATRIEL
Characters, every one. Assigned. Predictable. You were always going to lose in my room.
PAGE 15
P27CLOSE, Nässla

standing at the edge of the octagon, unreflected, watching. She hasn't moved. She's waiting for something.

NÄSSLAquietly
…Not yet.
P28CLOSE, Kali

rising from Smurjan's shadow, one-armed, panting, sickle up, standing over the fallen Rougeina.

KALI
You want a character? Try writing me. I'm not even on your books, lady.
PAGE 16
P29CLOSE, Katriel

glancing at her with real interest for the first time.

KATRIEL
No. You're not, are you. You came out of a mirror's work, not mine. Unsigned.
KATRIEL
…And so did he.
P30CLOSE, the tallest mirror

of the octagon's eight walls. Its surface ripples, gently, the way water ripples when someone steps into it carefully.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P31WIDE.

Bali steps out of the tallest mirror onto the octagon floor: black braid, mirror-scale coat glittering, twin sickles drawn. Every Ward in the room bows to him. Echo's herald.

P32FINAL PANEL, close on Bali

looking past everyone at his sister.

BALI
Now, sister.
END OF CHAPTER 82

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.