SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 1 · Katriel

Chapter 83

Two Borrowers
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the octagon.

The fight stops for one breath. Wards, crew, even Katriel at her desk, all looking at the two figures facing each other across the mirrored floor: the red braid and the black braid.

P2CLOSE, Kali

sickle up, one-armed, breathing hard.

KALI
You don't get to say "now" to me. You don't get to say anything to me. I met you twice.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Bali

soft.

BALI
I've met you every night of your life. In spoons. In puddles. In the back of your sickle when you clean it. You sing when you clean it. Off-key.
KALIflushing furious red
I DO NOT—
P4CLOSE, Smurjan

stepping up behind her, third eye open.

SMURJAN
She stays with us.
BALI
She's half of me. You've been keeping her in a body that isn't ours.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Kali

glancing back at Smurjan, then at Bali. Her jaw sets.

KALI
Stay out of this, big man. It's a family fight.
P6ACTION.

She launches, sickle first. Bali meets her, twin mirror-sickles crossing. CLANG. And they're gone, into the mirrors.

PAGES 4–5 — THE MIRROR DUEL
P7ACTION, a run of fast panels, across the octagon's walls.

The twins fight through the reflections:

Bali steps into one mirror and out of another behind her. Kali was waiting for him there.

Kali can't walk through mirrors, so she borrows his way of doing it: her eyes flash silver as she breathes in his Pride, and she steps into the glass after him.

Bali returns it: the silver lifts off her mid-step, and she's spat out of the mirror onto the floor.

She borrows again. He returns again. Silver, gone, silver, gone.

P8WIDE, the octagon.

A ribbon of silver light whips back and forth between the twins across the room, borrowed and returned and borrowed and returned, faster and faster, and every time it passes through a mirror the mirror cracks.

PAGE 6
P9CLOSE, Katriel

looking up from her ledger, intrigued.

KATRIEL
…Oh, that's unstable.
P10CLOSE, Trollmage

on Drekk's back, one eye cracking open.

TROLLMAGE
It's a loop. A borrow and a return with no owner. It'll go faster and faster until something breaks.
DREKK
Like what?
TROLLMAGE
Ideally the mirrors.
PAGES 7–8 — SPLASH
P11SPLASH (double page). THE RICOCHET.

The silver ribbon is now a blur, a shrieking line of light whipping between Kali and Bali hundreds of times a second, and the octagon is coming apart around it. Mirrors burst in sequence around all eight walls like fireworks, raining glass. Wards are thrown flat. Katriel's desk slides across the floor. The seven hovering sin-shapes wobble in their orbits.

At the two ends of the ribbon the twins stand braced, Kali with her one hand thrust out and Bali with his two, faces lit silver, exactly mirrored, neither one letting go.

PAGE 9
P12CLOSE, Kali

through gritted teeth, the ribbon screaming between them.

KALI
…Why won't you just stop—
BALIthrough gritted teeth
…You stop—
P13CLOSE, the two of them

and both start to laugh at the same moment, the same laugh, helplessly.

PAGE 10
P14ACTION.

They let go together. The silver ribbon snaps, unspools into harmless glitter, and drifts down over the ruined octagon like snow.

P15WIDE.

The twins on their knees on the cracked mirror floor, ten metres apart, panting, glittering with silver dust. Every mirror around them is broken.

PAGE 11
P16MID.

Bali gets up first. He crosses the floor to her slowly and holds out his hand.

BALI
Come home. There's a room inside the glass. Quiet. Nobody borrows anything; nobody's half of anybody. We'd be whole. I've kept it ready for you since we broke.
P17CLOSE, Kali

looking at his hand. Then at her own one hand. The stump of her other arm. Then at the bowl she isn't holding.

PAGE 12
P18CLOSE, Kali

turning her head to look behind her: Smurjan, standing with his three shadows, his face very still and very scared. Bakasura's small sad eyes peering out of his shadow. Rougeina bleeding on the floor. Vigolas grinning at her through a split lip. Kompis, powerless, holding his dog.

P19CLOSE, Kali

and for once she doesn't talk fast.

KALI
…I always take. My whole life. Sixty seconds of somebody else's skin, and then I give it back and I'm empty again.
KALI
Then a quiet girl lent me something. Lent. And I learned the difference.
PAGE 13
P20CLOSE, Kali

looking up at her brother.

KALI
You want me whole? I am, a bit. Messy. One-armed. Loud. In a body that isn't ours, with a hungry brother and a sad one and seventeen dead people in the walls.
KALI
…I'm asking you to stay, brother. With us. I'm asking.
P21CLOSE, Bali.

His hand, held out, trembles. He was ready for her to fight. He wasn't ready to be asked.

PAGE 14
P22CLOSE, Bali

steel eyes wet.

BALI
…I can't. She mends me. Every time I step through, I crack a little. She mends me. Without her I'd shatter.
BALI
But I won't take you. Not if you're asking.
P23CLOSE, Kali

softly.

KALI
…Then come back. When you can. I'll set the bowl.
PAGE 15
P24ACTION.

Bali steps backwards, into the one mirror on the wall that is still unbroken. The glass ripples. Halfway in, he stops.

BALI
When you're ready, sister. Or when I am.
P25WIDE.

He's gone. The last mirror holds only Kali's reflection now. She stares at it for a long beat.

PAGE 16
P26CLOSE, Katriel

back at her desk amid the broken glass, her face shifting stranger to stranger, and finally annoyed.

KATRIEL
Unsigned children and their feelings.
KATRIEL
Very well. Let's finish the one I did sign.
P27ACTION.

She stands for the first time. She dips the crystal quill and reaches toward Rougeina, down on the floor, and toward the rose script that has been inscribing up Rougeina's forearm for twenty-seven years: her Envy.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P28CLOSE, the quill-tip

catching the edge of the rose script and pulling. The script lifts, half of it, the unwritten half, peeling up like a bandage. The written half won't come. The sin stretches between book and desk, tearing.

P29FINAL PANEL, close on Rougeina

arching off the mirror floor, her arm a ribbon of torn rose light, mouth open in a scream that shatters the last mirror in the room.

ROUGEINA
AAAAAAAAAHH—
END OF CHAPTER 83

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.