SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 1 · Katriel

Chapter 85

The Bloom
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the ruined octagon.

Shards on the floor, a crystal desk cracked down the middle, an empty chair. The seven sin-shapes still turn in the air overhead, slower now, wobbling. Nobody sits at the desk.

P2MID, the crew

standing among the shards. Vigolas, Smurjan, Kali, Kompis with Mingus, Drekk with Trollmage on his back, Nässla. Rougeina stands at the desk with her back to them, blades sheathed, rose script glowing down her arm.

PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, Vigolas

looking around, frowning, puzzled.

VIGOLAS
…So. What were we doing in here?
P4CLOSE, Smurjan

third eye half open, confused.

SMURJAN
There was… someone. At the desk. We were fighting someone.
KALI
Were we? I thought we were fighting Bali.
P5CLOSE, Rougeina

not turning around.

PAGE 3
P6CLOSE, the desk.

A small square seal of white light lifts off the back of an empty glove lying on the desk, like a leaf off water. It drifts up, turns once in the air, and floats away through a crack in the octagon's ceiling.

P7CUT, far away. The Council Hall in Glasheim.

The floor of glass, the ring of twelve chairs. The square of light floats down out of the air and settles on the Sixth Chair, and goes dark. Around the ring, nine Architects in their chairs look at it. None of them can remember who sat there.

PAGE 4
P8CLOSE, Kompis

getting slowly to his feet, looking at the glass cage of shards that holds the gold-masked Ward. The cage is crumbling, the shards dropping one by one with nobody to place them. Inside, the Ward's mask flickers gold, then less gold.

P9ACTION.

The gold leaves the Ward. A ribbon of golden light lifts out of its chest, snakes through the falling shards, crosses the room, and flies home: straight into the inside of Kompis's left wrist. The small golden knot settles back into his skin like it never left.

PAGE 5
P10CLOSE, Kompis

his eyes filming gold. And around the crew, threads blaze back into his sight: gold lines between every one of them. More than before. Thicker.

KOMPISbreathless
…There you all are.
P11CLOSE, Lilla Ulv

at his hip, and the soul-text bursts out of the steel like a puppy through a door:

LILLA ULV
KOMPIS! KOMPIS KOMPIS KOMPIS I WAS HERE THE WHOLE TIME I WAS YELLING—
KOMPISlaughing, crying
I know. I know, little one. I hear you. I hear you.
PAGE 6
P12CLOSE, the golden pulse line

along the bottom of the panel springing to life as Mingus presses against him. ba-DUM. ba-DUM.

P13CLOSE, Trollmage

looking up at the seven sin-shapes overhead, which are wobbling worse, orbits fraying.

TROLLMAGE
…Um. Whoever was holding those isn't holding them any more.
PAGES 7–8 — THE CLASH: SEVEN SINS LOOSE
P14ACTION, a run of fast panels.

The seven sin-shapes break orbit:

The crimson blade (Wrath) whips down across the octagon, slicing a wall in half.

The amber mouth (Gluttony) swoops and swallows the cracked desk whole.

The violet hourglass (Sloth) drifts past Drekk, and he yawns enormously and nearly falls asleep standing.

The emerald coin (Greed) spins straight at Vigolas, who catches it on reflex, "Mine!", and it burns his hand and he drops it.

The silver ring and the rose ribbon circle Rougeina like hounds.

P15WIDE.

The octagon is coming down. The ceiling cracks. The floor of shards slides toward the edges. Nässla walks calmly through it all.

NÄSSLA
They're not attacking. They're leaving. No desk, no Keeper. They want out.
PAGE 9
P16CLOSE, Vigolas.
VIGOLAS
Then let's get out of their way! EVERYBODY OUT!
P17ACTION.

The crew runs for the mirror-doors. Smurjan drags Kali. Drekk carries Trollmage. Kompis runs with Mingus at his heel and Lilla Ulv yipping in his holster. Rougeina last, because she turned back once to look at the empty chair.

PAGES 10–11 — SPLASH
P18SPLASH (double page). THE BLOOM.

The roof of the octagon bursts open, and the seven sins pour out into the sky over Glasheim: emerald, crimson, gold, violet, silver, rose and amber, seven great ribbons of light the size of rivers. Above the white towers they scatter, flying in seven directions, splitting and splitting again into thousands of small sparks, a firework that covers the whole world.

Below on the Mirror Road, tiny against the burning sky, the crew stands among the falling glass, faces lit in seven colours, watching it go.

PAGE 12
P19CLOSE, Trollmage

very quiet.

TROLLMAGE
…Nobody's going to be assigned any more. Nobody's going to sit at a desk and decide who a child becomes. They'll just… wake up as whatever they are.
P20CLOSE, Kompis

looking up, the gold in his eyes catching the falling sparks.

KOMPIS
That's good. Isn't it? That's good.
TROLLMAGE
It's good. It's also going to be chaos.
PAGE 13
P21MID, the Mirror Road

later. The crew sits on the edge of the starlight path, catching their breath. Nässla stands apart.

NÄSSLA
I'm staying in my field. Somebody has to sting the liars, and there are going to be a lot of new ones.
NÄSSLAto Rougeina
Break a promise to me and I'll know. The nettles always grow.
ROUGEINA
I don't make promises.
NÄSSLAa small smile
That one burned. A little.
P22WIDE.

Nässla walks back into the dark between the mirrors, unreflected, gone.

PAGE 14
P23CLOSE, Smurjan

holding a scrap of parchment he took from the cracked desk before the Gluttony-shape ate it: an old decree, sealed in white wax. In the Order's script: BY ORDER OF THE COUNCIL: ONE SOUL, DIVIDED, TO BE HELD IN TRINITY. And under it, a signature that is blank: the ink is there, but nobody can read the name any more.

SMURJAN
…It was the Order. The Order split us. A signature. I can't read whose.
P24CLOSE, Kali

reading over his shoulder.

KALI
Someone with a desk.
SMURJAN
And someone with a mirror.
PAGE 15
P25CLOSE, Rougeina

apart, sitting on the edge of the path with the list unfolded in her hand. She crosses off KATRIEL with a stub of charcoal. To her, a name. To anyone looking over her shoulder, a line that was always blank.

P26RANK PLATE

floating over her, updated by every board in the world: ROUGEINA · K-IV SHAPED · Scalelist #777. The rank has climbed now that the Codex is read. The number stays frozen.

P27CLOSE, Rougeina's hand on her chest.

For just a moment, a missed beat. Her heart skips. She frowns and dismisses it.

PAGE 16
P28NIGHT. The Marka

sailing away from Astralis. Supper at the galley table. Kali comes up from the hold with bowls on her one arm and sets them out: one, two, three, four. This time she sets the fourth one on purpose, at the empty end of the bench, and fills it.

P29CLOSE, Smurjan

looking at it, then at her.

SMURJAN
…For when he comes back?
KALI
For when he comes back.
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30MONTAGE, five small panels. The world, the next morning.

A fishing village: a girl wakes up with a gold knot glowing on her wrist and screams for her mother.

A market island: an old baker stares at a violet hourglass on the back of his hand.

A Trisdel barracks: a Sentinel pulls off his helmet and finds crimson script running up his neck. His officer backs away.

A troll hall in Brygdar: a young troll holds up an arm covered in amber.

A Scalelist board in a city square: the numbers are going wild, thousands of names jumping, new names appearing faster than the stone can carve them.

P31FINAL PANEL, a little boy in a doorway

staring at a rose ribbon curling up his arm, nobody's assignment and nobody's decision, his own.

LITTLE BOY
…Mamma? What am I?
END OF CHAPTER 85

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.