SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 3 · Urverket

Chapter 97

The Unwound
PAGE 1
P1DARK. Inside the gap.

Kompis tumbles down a chute of greasy brass into a narrow space lit by stolen lantern-light. Mingus lands on top of him. Above, the gap grinds shut.

P2CLOSE, Kugge

crouching over him, grease on her cheeks, the little brass cog swinging from her ear, grinning.

KUGGE
Hi! You're welcome! You're very bad at being arrested.
PAGE 2
P3WIDE, the gaps.

A hidden world between the gears: a long, narrow, ever-shifting town built in the spaces where the teeth don't quite meet. Rope bridges, lantern strings, hammocks, a bakery in a hollow axle. Every house is built to move with the gears. People everywhere, ordinary and ragged and loud. No clocks anywhere.

P4CLOSE, Kompis

staring.

KOMPIS
…There's no ticking.
KUGGE
Nope. We broke our schedules. All of us. We're the Unwound.
PAGE 3
P5MONTAGE, four quick panels, Kugge's tour:

A baker pulling bread out of an oven: "Baked it at the wrong hour! Tastes better!"

A couple dancing: "We married on a Tuesday nobody scheduled!"

An old man asleep in the afternoon, which is illegal up top: "…mm… crime…"

Children playing a game with no rules, shrieking.

P6CLOSE, Kugge.
KUGGE
Up top, your whole life's written before you're born. When you eat, when you marry, when you die. You do it on the minute or the Timekeepers come.
KUGGE
Down here, nothing's due. It's wonderful. It's also very cramped.
PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Kompis.
KOMPIS
My crew. They took my crew.
KUGGE
The Ticking Gaol. Yeah, we know it. (grinning) Nobody gets out of the Ticking Gaol, because the guards change exactly on the hour and there's never a gap.
KUGGE
…Except one second.
P8CLOSE, Kugge

holding up a stub of chalk with a drawing of a clock face, and one tick-mark in red.

KUGGE
Every schedule on Urverket has one seam. One second a day when nothing is due. We call it the gap-second. We live in it.
PAGES 5–6 — THE JAILBREAK
P9WIDE, the Ticking Gaol.

A tower of cells, each one a clock-face, the prisoners' chains ticking. The crew is in one large cell, chained to the wall. Vigolas is upside down, having tried to climb the wall chained.

P10ACTION, a run of panels counting down.

Above the gaol the clock strikes. DONG. The guards begin their change, perfectly in step.

Fifty-seven… Kugge's Unwound slither out of a drain.

Fifty-eight… Kompis and Mingus run along a pipe above the cells.

Fifty-nine… the guards turn their backs in perfect unison, exactly as scheduled.

P11ACTION, the gap-second.

The panel is drawn with no ticking at all, silent, the only frame on the planet where nothing is due. In that one second: Kompis drops into the cell. Kugge's grease-black fingers pick three locks. Mingus pulls a chain loose with his teeth. Rougeina, unchained, Swaps the whole crew one by one into the drain.

P12ACTION.

Tick. The second ends. The guards turn round to an empty cell and chains swinging.

PAGE 7
P13WIDE, back in the gaps.

The crew, freed and filthy, surrounded by curious Unwound. Bakasura's small eyes rise out of Smurjan's shadow, look at the bakery in the axle, and drool.

VIGOLAS
Okay, I love it down here. Who's in charge?
KUGGEhand up
Me. Kugge. Twelve. Don't laugh.
VIGOLAS
Wasn't going to! I was in charge of a pirate ship at twelve!
DREKKthrough the mask
No, you weren't.
VIGOLAS
I was in charge in spirit.
PAGE 8
P14MID, an Unwound kitchen

crowded. The crew eats wrong-hour bread. An old woman, Gran Fjäder, unscheduled for forty years, sits across from Vigolas.

GRAN FJÄDER
The clock-hand in your deck. Ninth hour, ninth day. Do you know what else happens at the ninth hour of the ninth day?
P15CLOSE, Gran Fjäder

leaning in.

GRAN FJÄDER
She dies.
PAGE 9
P16CLOSE, Vigolas.
VIGOLAS
…Who? Otur?
P17CLOSE, Gran Fjäder.
GRAN FJÄDER
Long ago, when she was young and very proud, she made an appointment nobody had ever dared: the hour of her own death. To show she ruled even that.
GRAN FJÄDER
She's bound by her own appointments, same as us. She can't move it. Every tick of this whole world is a tick toward it.
PAGE 10
P18CLOSE, Kompis.
KOMPIS
And she put us on the same hour.
GRAN FJÄDERnodding slowly
She's never let anyone near her in three hundred years. Never let anyone late. Never let anyone in.
GRAN FJÄDER
She doesn't want to go alone.
P19CLOSE, Rougeina

very quiet.

ROUGEINA
…So she's taking a ship with her.
PAGE 11
P20A SOUND.

Far above, a great CLANK. Then another. The gaps shudder. Lanterns swing. Dust pours down.

P21CLOSE, Kugge

white.

KUGGE
They're turning the gears. Off-schedule. They've never done that, they can't, unless—
SEKUNDdistant, from above, amplified through a brass horn
BY APPOINTMENT OF THE EMPRESS: AT THREE EXACTLY, THE GEARS TURN.
PAGES 12–13 — SPLASH
P22SPLASH (double page). THE GAPS CLOSE.

The enormous gear-teeth on both sides of the hidden town begin to grind together, closing the gaps with the force of continents. Brass walls slide in like the jaws of the world. Rope bridges snap. Lantern strings tear. Houses built to move are crushed like matchboxes. Unwound run screaming toward the last open seams, carrying children and bread and old people.

And at the centre of the spread, where the biggest gap is closing fastest, the crew: Smurjan braced, and rising out of his shadow, Bakasura, his colossal maw jammed between two gear-teeth, holding them open, teeth on brass, brass on teeth, the whole weight of a continent grinding against his jaws.

BAKASURAthrough clenched jaws, slow
…GO.
PAGE 14
P23ACTION.

The Unwound pour through the gap Bakasura holds: Kugge herding children, the baker with his bread, Gran Fjäder on Drekk's back. Kompis and Mingus last.

P24CLOSE, Smurjan

on his knees, sweating, holding Bakasura up from inside.

SMURJAN
…He held a mouth open for us once. (a look at Drekk) No. She did. Now it's his turn.
P25CLOSE, Drekk

stopping in the gap, looking at Bakasura's jaws straining against the brass. Through the bell-rope mask, a long look. Then:

DREKK
…Hold on, you big ugly thing. Just a bit longer.
PAGE 15
P26ACTION.

The last of the Unwound are through. Bakasura lets go. The gear-teeth slam shut with a BOOM that shakes the planet. Bakasura sinks back into Smurjan's shadow, jaw cracked, "…Crunchy," very faintly.

P27WIDE, a new hiding place

a wider gap deep in the planet's core gears. The Unwound, crowded and shaken, counting heads. Nobody lost. Kugge looking at Bakasura's shadow with enormous eyes.

KUGGE
…The mouth saved us.
PAGE 16
P28WIDE, above.

The crew climbs a shaft up to a spy-hole in the back of a public clock-face in a city square. Through the numerals they can see the square, the Timekeepers, and far off the great Clocktower.

P29CLOSE, Kompis

eyes going gold. Lust-sight. He looks toward the Clocktower, searching for Otur's threads among the planet's ruler-straight lines.

PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P30KOMPIS'S POV.

Thousands of perfectly straight, parallel threads (schedule, schedule, schedule) all converging on the Clocktower. And from the top of the tower, where Otur sits, only one thread of her own: thin, gold, crooked, the only crooked line on the whole planet. It runs to a small object on the arm of her throne.

P31FINAL PANEL, close (through the spy-hole, telescope-sharp).

On the arm of a brass throne: a tiny brass music box, its lid closed, its key dusty. It has never been wound.

KOMPISwhispering
…She has one thread. And it's tied to a music box that's never played.
END OF CHAPTER 97

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.