SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 8 · Brygdar Rises

Chapter 138

The Unfelled
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, the Long Stair

cut down through the heart of the mountain: torches, steps worn into bowls by a thousand years of troll feet. The crew descends. Behind them six troll guards carry the sleeping king on a great round shield like a litter, crown crooked, snoring, the crow asleep on his chest. At the front, Old Stav, with the king-staff in one hand and a basket of bread on his back.

VIGOLAS
Drekk's bringing the Marka round to Codexia by sea. Says he doesn't do stairs.
STAV
Nobody does these stairs. They do you.
P2CLOSE, the ceiling

low and black and sweating. A drop falls on Kali's nose.

KALI
How far down is this?
STAV
Further than you'd like. (He taps the dripping rock with the staff.) That's the fjord. Above us.
ROUGEINAquietly, to Vigolas
Meirwen's at the bottom.
VIGOLAS
Then so are we.
PAGES 2–3 — SPLASH
P3SPLASH (double page). THE UNFELLED.

The stair opens into the Ring Halls: a vast vaulted corridor, its walls covered floor to ceiling with rubbings of growth rings, thousands of them in grey chalk on grey stone, glowing faintly green like moonlight on water.

Across the corridor, kneeling, fills the whole hall: a colossus of grey bark, six metres tall on his knees. The stone floor is cracked and heaved up around his knees like ice around a pier. Ferns grow along his head, and mice run along paths through them. His face is bark, with a split for a mouth, a moss beard, and two old axe-wounds healed into eye-shapes, a grey-green light deep inside each. On his chest the bark is sheared away in a great cross-section: thousands of growth rings, most glowing faint green, some black. Bristling along his back like a fence: nine axes, a sword, a spear, and a huge yellowed tooth, all grown over by bark at the edges.

And on ladders against his sides, little grey clerks turn brass cranks, drilling hollow brass tubes into him and drawing out long grey cores of wood.

The Ring Halls, under Codexia, where Ferdinand's root comes in. Every wall is a rubbing of one giant's rings.

EKEN · FERDINAND-2 · unranked (Order threat class K-IV: "do not engage") · not on any board

PAGE 4
P4CLOSE, a Shelver

on a ladder, peering down through round spectacles, a brass core-tube under his arm.

RANK PLATE ×8: SHELVER · K-I · Archive Indexing

SHELVER
Please don't interrupt. We don't strike him. We sample. Architect Five needs the war records.
P5ACTION.

Stav, for the first time anyone has seen, is angry. He slams the king-staff on the floor, and the hall rings.

STAV
Get your drills out of him.

ACTION, same panel, a strip of beats. Kali bursts out of Smurjan's shadow right under a ladder: "BOO!" Bakasura rises out of the floor and eats a whole drilling rig, crank and all: "…Tastes like… old." The Shelvers flee up a side passage like startled pigeons, dropping brass tubes that roll clattering across the floor.

PAGE 5
P6CLOSE, Eken's face.

The light in the axe-wound eyes brightens. The bark mouth opens slowly, like a door that hasn't been opened in years. His balloon is thick-bordered, wood-grained, with wide gaps between the words.

EKEN
Hit. … Me.
P7CLOSE, Vigolas

hands up, friendly.

VIGOLAS
Hey, big man. No offence. We just need to get past you.
EKEN
Hit. … Me. … I'll keep it. … I'll give it back … later.
PAGE 6
P8ACTION.

Rougeina marks a pebble lying on the floor beyond the giant and Swaps with it, and lands exactly where she started. The pebble is back on the far side. She tries again. Same.

STAV
The Kneel. The corridor is his body now. Nothing passes the Unfelled.
P9CLOSE, Rougeina

glaring up at the bark face. Her hand drifts to a blade and stops, because drawing it would mean hitting him.

ROUGEINA
…I hate him.
EKEN
Hit. … Me. … Then.
ROUGEINA
No.
PAGE 7
P10CLOSE, Smurjan

third eye open, a crimson Sightline running to the great cross-section on Eken's chest. Inset in the panel, glimpses of what the rings hold: an army of spears in the dark; a giant with a club; a war-engine with a bronze head swinging out of torchlight; a knight weeping as he swings an axe.

SMURJAN
Three thousand years. Every ring is someone who hit him. · Every one.
P11CLOSE, Kompis, eyes gold.

Almost no threads at all around the giant: a few to the mice, and one, thick and warm and slightly crusty, running back to Stav's basket of bread.

KOMPIS
He's hardly tied to anybody. Mice. · And the bread.
PAGE 8
P12CLOSE, Bakasura's maw

rising hopefully beside Smurjan, small sad eyes high above the teeth.

BAKASURA
…Can I eat him?
EVERYONE
NO.
KALI
He's asking for it, though!
SMURJAN
That's the trap.
PAGE 9
P13ACTION, slow.

Eken's right arm moves. Just the shoulder, at first: bark creaking, dust pouring off it like sand off a lifted plank.

P14ACTION, slower.

The arm swings out, wide and enormous and unhurried, like a tree falling sideways in a gale.

P15ACTION.

BARK-HAND. A giant palm three centuries heavy lands full on Vigolas's chest. WHUDDD.

PAGE 10
P16WIDE.

Vigolas flies the whole length of the hall, coat flaring, shards clinking, and smashes into a wall of rubbings, which comes down on top of him in a heap.

KOMPIS
CAPTAIN!
P17CLOSE, the rubble.

Silence. Then a sound comes out of it: laughter. Vigolas climbs out, bleeding from the nose, dust in his hair, laughing so hard he has to hold his ribs.

VIGOLAS
HA! Ha-ha! That's a HAND! That's the biggest hand I've ever been hit with!

He walks back up the hall, all the way, stops at the giant's knee, and looks up. His fists stay open.

VIGOLAS
…Nope. Not hitting you.
PAGE 11
P18CLOSE, Eken.

A long pause, three panels long: the same bark face, the light in the eyes slowly changing.

EKEN
…You. … Didn't. … Hit. … Me.
P19CLOSE, Eken.
EKEN
…Nobody … ever … doesn't.
PAGE 12
P20ACTION.

Mingus trots round behind the giant, sniffs along the bark, picks out the huge yellow tooth sticking out of his back between the axes, takes it in his mouth, plants his paws, and tugs.

P21ACTION.

Pok. It comes free. Mingus prances away across the hall with a tooth half as long as he is clamped in his jaws, tail going like a flag.

EKENslowly turning his head, three panels to do it
…That. … Was. … The first thing … anyone has taken from me … without a blow. … In three thousand years.
KOMPIS
Mingus! Give it—
EKEN
…Keep it.
MINGUSaround the tooth
Mmf!
PAGE 13
P22CLOSE, Stav

setting his basket of bread down at Eken's knee, the way he has done every week of his life.

STAV
Tuesday.
EKEN
…Mouse. … Who.

A grey, ink-stained mouse scurries down the giant's arm with a crumpled scrap of paper and holds it up. On it, in tiny letters: EKEN. And under that, in newer, smaller ink: BREAD-MAN.

EKEN
…Bread. … Man.
STAVsmiling
Two hundred and twelve years of Tuesdays. Still Bread-Man.
P23CLOSE, Eken

looking down at the sleeping troll on the shield, the crooked crown, the long ears.

EKEN
…Runa's … ears. … Your great-great-grandmother … leaned on me once. … (very long pause) … She was … rude.
KALIsnorting so hard she nearly falls back into the shadow
Oh, I like him.
PAGE 14
P24ACTION, one slow panel.

Eken lifts his left arm like a drawbridge, rubble and moss pouring off it, until a passage opens beneath it, tall enough for a troll.

P25MID.

The six guards set the shield with the sleeping king down at the giant's knee, beside the bread. Stav sits down next to it with the staff across his lap.

STAV
Go on. I'll stay with the king. (He pats the bark of Eken's knee.) Behind the Unfelled is the safest place in nine realms.
PAGE 15
P26CLOSE, Stav and Kompis.

Kompis crouches by him for a moment.

STAV
Kompis. That thread. To Ulla. Is it still there?
KOMPISeyes gold
The warmest one you've got.
STAV
Good. (He leans back against the giant, eyes half shut.) I'll ask her again in spring.
P27CLOSE, Vigolas

at the passage under the giant's arm, looking back.

VIGOLAS
Keep him snoring, Stav.
STAV
He's never needed help with that.
PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P28WIDE.

The crew passes under Eken's arm and down a short passage that glows violet at the far end.

P29FINAL PANEL, wide: the Library's root gallery.

Violet light, a spiral of galleries rising out of sight, pedestals in alcoves, and on each pedestal a thick old book, chained shut, glowing faintly in its sin's colour. Over every one of them, grey Correctors bend with red quills. Red ink runs across the glowing pages like cuts. At the far end, in the open door of a white reading room, a woman sits at a lectern, not looking up.

MEIRWEN
Everything is a draft until I've read it.
END OF CHAPTER 138

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.