SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga IV · The Twelfth Chair · Arc 7 · Solvig

Chapter 209

The Erased
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, night, the Bastion jetty.

The crew sitting round a lantern with Oswin, his wheeling star-map turning slowly over the stones, the hull of the Marka, their faces. The satchel open between them. Eleven shards of glass in straw, glowing faintly.

P2CLOSE, Oswin

lifting one shard out with long careful fingers and holding it up to the lantern.

OSWIN
…Every soul Solvig ever signed away. · The Archive was meant to forget them. I indexed them instead. · Then I hid the index from myself.
PAGE 2
P3CLOSE, the shard

against the light. Inside it, tiny, crowded as a city seen from a mountain: faces. Thousands. Old, young, soldiers, children, a troll with a pipe, a woman with a basket. All grey. All looking out.

Uncounted means no one remembers. Except whoever kept the record.
P4CLOSE, Trollmage

very quietly, looking at one face in the shard: a troll child with a carved toy.

TROLLMAGE
…Fjellheim. · Sigvat's village. · She signed that.
PAGE 3
P5CLOSE, Rougeina

taking a shard from Oswin without asking, turning it in the light. Thousands of grey faces. She's very still.

ROUGEINA
…Nobody remembers any of them.
OSWIN
Nobody but the glass. · And now you.
P6CLOSE, Rougeina's hand

her other hand going to her heart. Her own dead (eight names, all of them now remembered by Kompis too) have company.

ROUGEINAbarely audible
…There's so many.
PAGE 4
P7CLOSE, Oswin

holding up the eleventh shard, darker than the others. Inside it, not faces: a room. Black stone. One desk. And one window, and through the window, grey. In front of the window, a tall straight figure in black and white. And on the other side of the glass, faint, a second figure, grey, faceless, one hand raised as if in greeting.

OSWIN
…This one's not a list. · It's a record. · Of her visitor.
P8CLOSE, Vigolas

staring at the faceless grey figure in the shard. The same shape he's seen at the edge of the world.

VIGOLAS
…I know him.
PAGE 5
P9A SOUND.

Hounds. Baying, down the Bastion's long stair from the open gate above. Then boots. Many.

P10WIDE, the Bastion stair.

Pouring down it: Cleaners, a squad in severe black-and-white uniforms printed like the columns of a page, white gloves, and at their heels grey hounds, lean and colourless, eyes blank. At their head, a broad man with cotton stuffed in both ears and a brass ear-trumpet hanging from his belt.

RANK PLATE ×20: CLEANER · K-III TESTED · the Null Protocol

SKRUBB · K-IV SHAPED · Scalelist #1,450 · Chief Cleaner

PAGE 6
P11CLOSE, Skrubb

shouting, much too loud, the way the deaf do.

SKRUBB
OSWIN DRAEKHOLM! BY ORDER OF THE SECOND CHAIR! YOU WILL SURRENDER THE MISFILED INDEX AND COME TO THE VAULT!
OSWINmildly, adjusting his spectacles
…He can't hear a word I say. It's quite restful.
P12CLOSE, Kompis

hand on Bror.

KOMPIS
Lillebror. · Gently.
BROR
Okay.
PAGES 7–8 — THE CLASH
P13ACTION, a run of fast panels.

The Cleaners on the jetty.

The grey hounds lunge, and where they bite the jetty stones, the stone greys: little erasures in their teeth. Mingus meets them head-on, and the grey hounds stop, sniff, and start wagging. He's the first dog they've met that they can't grey.

Bror's shove, BRA-DOOM, sweeps a line of Cleaners back up the stair, unhurt and furious.

Smurjan's Triple Pulse knocks three hounds' muzzles shut at once.

Ysel, who was on the Kettle's crew and knows how Cleaners move, trips two of them with a rope she's knotted to the bollards. Best knots on any boat.

P14ACTION.

Skrubb, standing on the stair, raises his brass ear-trumpet, not to his ear, but pointed at the fight. And every sound on the jetty, every footstep, every shout, every clank of a blade, comes out of it ten times louder: a wall of noise that slams the crew to their knees, hands over their ears.

WHAAAAAAAMMMMM
PAGE 9
P15CLOSE, Skrubb

smiling, serene, because he hears nothing at all.

SKRUBBbellowing
LOUD! · EVERYTHING I HEAR IS LOUD! · AND I HAVEN'T HEARD A THING IN TWENTY YEARS!
P16CLOSE, Isa

on her knees, both hands over her ears, the noise hammering, and through it planting her feet.

ISAnot moving her lips
…Then nothing makes a sound.

…ba—

(In her sight, everything stops, and stopped things make no sound. The wall of noise cuts off.)

PAGES 10–11 — SPLASH
P17SPLASH (double page). SILENCE IN THE HOLD.

The Bastion jetty frozen blue-white in Isa's hold, frost at the borders: Cleaners mid-lunge, grey hounds mid-leap, Skrubb on the stair with his ear-trumpet raised, and every SFX on the spread frozen in mid-air as solid letters, huge, hanging, silent. Through the frozen noise, hands on Isa's shoulders, the crew walking calmly: Vigolas plucking the ear-trumpet out of Skrubb's hand, Rougeina disarming Cleaners, Kompis knotting a hound's leash round a bollard, Mingus trotting among the frozen grey dogs, sniffing them one by one.

PAGE 12
P18ACTION.

Release, —DUM: Skrubb finds his trumpet gone and his squad disarmed, and the grey hounds lying down round Mingus with their tails thumping.

SKRUBBbewildered, bellowing
…WHAT HAPPENED? · NOBODY TELLS ME ANYTHING!
P19WIDE.

The Cleaners retreating up the stair, dragging Skrubb, who is still shouting. The grey hounds stay behind, lying in a pile round Mingus.

VIGOLAS
…I think we've got dogs now.
KOMPIS
Mingus has got dogs now.
PAGE 13
P20A NEW SOUND, afterwards.

Not a battle sound. The soft chk of a spade going into earth. On the jetty's far end, where the stones meet the fjord, there is suddenly ground that wasn't there: a flat grey island of ash, rising out of the water, smoke drifting over it.

P21WIDE, ASKSLÄTTEN.

On the ash plain, a lone man in a long coat patched from a hundred armies, a scarf of regimental scarves wound three times round his neck, digging with a short spade. Round his feet, laid out neatly: the rings, lockets and folded letters the Unwritten left in the shallows.

KVAR · RÖNNKVIST-5 · not on any board (the ink fading as we watch)

PAGE 14
P22CLOSE, Kvar

not looking up from his digging.

KVAR
…I'm always here. · You haven't been looking.
ROUGEINAwalking out onto the ash, the first to go to him
…Kvar.
KVAR
…I heard about the old soldier. · Aldhrun. · I'll carry him.
P23CLOSE, Rougeina

sitting down on the ash next to the man who carries Stillmark for her, and who once carried her.

ROUGEINA
…There's a woman in Glasheim who signed away more people than I've ever met.
KVARstill digging
…Solvig. · I've carried a few of hers.
PAGE 15
P24CLOSE, Öde

coming out onto the ash, looking at the lockets and rings laid in rows, then at the grey faces in the shard Rougeina still holds.

ÖDE
…How do you carry them all?
KVAR
…I say them. · Out loud. · When you say a name out loud, it's heard. While it's being heard, nobody can take it.
P25CLOSE, Kvar

finally looking up at the farm girl with names on her arms. A long, tired, kind look.

KVAR
…You do it alone. Every morning. · I've watched. · Try it with everyone.
PAGE 16
P26CLOSE, Kvar's hand

taking Öde's, raising it, turning her toward the crew on the jetty.

KVAR
…The Roll-Call. · One voice is a memory. Many voices is a witness. · Say one name. All of you. Together.
ÖDEto the crew, hesitant, then clearer
…Aldhrun.
CREWtogether, every voice on the jetty, the Bastion guards too
Aldhrun.
P27CLOSE, the jetty stones

where Aldhrun stood. A faint warmth in the air. Lärka, on the stair, with her hand over her heart.

KVARquietly
…There. · Now he's heard by forty. · Remembering isn't the same as carrying. · But it helps.
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P28CLOSE, Oswin

sitting on a bollard with the eleventh shard in his lap, the star-map wheeling over him, very tired.

OSWIN
…You can't fight her in the Vault. · In her seat, she doesn't need anyone to read the writ. She signs, and it's done. · Nobody's ever beaten an Architect who erases by erasing her back.
P29FINAL PANEL, close on Oswin

looking up at Vigolas through three pairs of spectacles.

OSWIN
…There's only one way to unwrite an Architect who signs erasures. · You'll need someone who's said nothing for a thousand years.
END OF CHAPTER 209

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.