SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 2 · The Gate Yard

Chapter 89

Falling In A Circle
PAGE 1
P1WIDE, falling.

The crew tumbles down through an endless violet sky. Far below, catching the light, rise the golden spires of the Library of Codexia, towers made of stacked books, with loose pages wheeling around them in flocks like starlings.

TROLLMAGEfalling, upside down, delighted and horrified
The Library! I can see it! That's the Hall of Indexes! That's my great-great-grandmother's reading window—
P2CLOSE, below them.

Rising up to meet them out of the violet: a white iron frame, lying flat in the sky like an open trapdoor.

VIGOLAS
…Is that a—
PAGE 2
P3ACTION.

They fall straight into it.

P4WIDE.

And they fall out of another frame hanging high in the air above the Weir: the white walls, the pinned Marka, the glowing web of lines far below, and in the middle of the quay the same open floor-frame waiting for them, violet sky showing through it.

On the Marka's deck, Drekk lifts his masked face as they pass overhead. He can't see them. He feels them go by, a rush of wind across the deck.

P5ACTION.

They plunge back into the floor-frame and come out into the violet sky over the Library again, a little faster than before.

KALI
WE'RE FALLING IN A CIRCLE!
PAGES 3–4 — SPLASH
P6SPLASH (double page). THE LOOP.

One giant ring of falling bodies, drawn as a single continuous circle that runs down through the open floor-frame on the quay, out through the violet sky of Codexia, up into the frame hanging over the Weir, and down again. Speed lines thicken as they go round. Vigolas, coat flapping like a flag; Rougeina spinning, the panther clinging to her back; Smurjan perfectly upright even in free fall, arms folded; Trollmage tumbling with his Codex clutched to his chest and the crow flapping desperately after him; Kali shrieking; and Kompis with Mingus in his arms. Each lap they're faster. Behind them, the golden spires of the Library flash past, then the white walls of the Weir, then the spires again.

PAGE 5
P7CLOSE, Trollmage

upside down, ears streaming.

TROLLMAGE
We're getting faster every lap! The longer this goes on, the harder we hit when he shuts it!
VIGOLAS
How hard?!
TROLLMAGE
VERY!
P8CLOSE.

Falling beside them, a tiny white frame, hand-sized, keeps pace, and in it, Wendlan's face, chin on his fist, mildly interested.

WENDLAN
I can do this all day, lads. Can you?
PAGE 6
P9ACTION, falling.

Ideas fly as fast as they do.

SMURJAN
We can't walk on air.
VIGOLAS
Rougeina, Swap us out!
ROUGEINA
Swap one of us out. With a gull. You want me to pick?
VIGOLAS
…No.
ROUGEINA
Then I'm staying in the circle.
P10ACTION.
VIGOLAS
Then break a door! Break one and it shuts!
TROLLMAGE
On whatever's halfway through it! We're strung out round the whole circle! Break it now and somebody's in two pieces!
PAGE 7
P11CLOSE, Kompis

falling, holding Mingus tight against his chest, his face grey with fear.

P12CLOSE, Mingus.

Ears flying straight up, tongue streaming out of the side of his mouth, tail going round like a windmill. The dog is having the best day of his entire life.

P13CLOSE, Kompis

laughing in spite of himself, tears blown sideways off his face.

KOMPIS
…Okay, buddy. Okay. You're right. It's a game.

Along the panel border, the golden pulse line, strong and happy: ba-DUM. ba-DUM.

PAGE 8
P14GREY WORLD. SUBTICK.

Everything stops mid-fall. The loop hangs frozen like a necklace in the sky, and Kompis lives the next heartbeat again and again. In version after version, somebody is halfway through a frame when it snaps: Vigolas's boot, the panther's tail, Kali's braid. Each failed version is a faint gold line that ends in a small ✕. He keeps looking. Nine hundred tries. Nine hundred and fifty.

P15GREY WORLD, close.

Then one. The top of the loop. For one heartbeat, every one of them is in open air between the two frames at once, the whole crew bunched together high over the Weir, nobody inside either door. And past Smurjan's shoulder, far below, the gleaming hinge of the floor-frame on the quay.

PAGE 9
P16ACTION.

Colour snaps back. At the top of the loop, Kompis twists in the air, braces Lilla Ulv on Smurjan's shoulder and fires straight down.

SMURJANnot looking
We're a good post.
P17ACTION.

The wolf cub of light runs down the sky like a dog down a hill and bonks the floor-frame's hinge.

KRAK

The floor-frame folds shut into solid white stone. Nobody halfway. Nobody anywhere near it.

LILLA ULVsoul-text, ecstatic
got it got it GOT IT
PAGE 10
P18CUT. The Gate Yard.
CRACK

Wendlan drops to one knee beside his bench, clutching his left wrist. It hangs at a bad angle.

WENDLAN
Ahh— nngh—
P19MID.

Beside the bench stands an open frame that looks out onto the pier at the Weir, and through it, far away, Veyra, still locked to her stake, has turned her head toward him. It's the only part of her that can move.

VEYRA
Sir.
P20CLOSE, Wendlan

getting up, waggling the broken wrist with a craftsman's annoyance, as if it were a sticky drawer.

WENDLAN
It's a hinge, Veyra. Hinges mend.
WENDLAN
You keep your stake in.
PAGE 11
P21WIDE, the Weir.

The loop is broken. The crew is no longer falling in a circle. They're falling in a line, at the speed of a dozen laps, straight down toward solid stone.

P22CLOSE, Kompis

still clutching Mingus, realising.

KOMPIS
…I didn't think about the landing.
VIGOLAS
LAZY ONE!
PAGE 12
P23CLOSE, Trollmage

falling, eyes snapping open violet. He writes in the air with one big finger, glowing letters streaming upward as he drops past them:

MACRO : UPDRAFT = 1 QUAY

TROLLMAGE
Half! Half of what I've got! Don't anybody ask me for the other half!
P24ACTION.

The whole quay's air heaves upward in one enormous breath. Sentinels' cloaks fly up over their heads; crates, hats, a fishing net and a very surprised seagull go straight into the sky; and the crew, a body-length from the stone, slows as if they'd fallen into a feather bed. They land in a soft heap on top of each other.

FWUMP
PAGE 13
P25MID, the heap.

Rougeina lands on her feet, of course. Everyone else lands on Smurjan.

KALImuffled, from the bottom
Never again. Never again.
BAKASURAfrom somewhere in Smurjan's shadow
…Again.
P26CLOSE, Trollmage

flat on his back, eyelids drooping, the crew still on top of him.

TROLLMAGE
…I still have the other half. Nobody touch it. I'm saving it for something stupid.
PAGE 14
P27WIDE.

They untangle themselves, and the web is still there: the white lines across the quay and the water, the pens, the pinned Marka, the Bloom-marked crowd behind the light. They're back in their boxes. And at the end of the pier Veyra hasn't moved an inch.

VEYRA
Still in the box.
P28ACTION.

Around them, new frames unfold, patient as a tide. Sentinels step out of them again.

VIGOLAScracking his neck
…He really can do this all day.
PAGE 15
P29ACTION, the fight resumes.

Kompis backs up toward the edge of the quay, Lilla Ulv up, Mingus at his heel, a Sentinel's shield coming at him.

P30ACTION.

Under Kompis's boots a frame unfolds, a narrow one, and he drops straight through it.

P31WIDE.

He comes out of a frame just above the harbour water, on the far side of a white line that runs along the waterline, and plunges in. Splash. He surfaces, coughing starlight-water. Between him and the quay: the line.

PAGE 16 — THE HOOK
P32ACTION.

Mingus doesn't hesitate. He leaps off the quay and swims, paddling hard toward his person, and bumps against the line as if against glass. He paddles again. Bump. He can't get across. Swimming isn't walking.

TROLLMAGEhorrified
Not on foot— he's swimming—
P33ACTION.

Out of another frame on the water, a chain of white light whips round Kompis's chest and starts to drag him toward a third frame, hanging open just above the waves. On the chain's far end, a Sentinel's voice:

SENTINEL
Asset. Absent without leave. Bring him home.
P34FINAL PANEL, close on Kompis

chained, dragged through the water, reaching back toward the dog. Mingus is paddling against a line he can't cross, barking and barking. Along the bottom border of the panel, the golden pulse line goes flat.

VIGOLASoff-panel
KOMPIS!
END OF CHAPTER 89

Script edition: the pages as written, before the art.