SCALELIST UNIVERSE
Saga III · The Architect War · Arc 2 · The Gate Yard

Chapter 90

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PAGE 1
P1ACTION, the harbour water.

Kompis, wrapped in the chain of light, is being dragged backwards through the waves toward a white frame hanging open just above the water. He grabs the frame's edge with one hand and hangs on, the chain hauling at him from inside.

KOMPISthrough gritted teeth
Not… going… back…
P2ACTION.

Mingus paddles at the line between them, bumps it, paddles, bumps it, barking himself hoarse. Along the bottom border of the panel the golden pulse line lies flat.

PAGE 2
P3MID, Vigolas's pen on the quay.

Vigolas and Rougeina stand back to back among fallen Sentinels, the panther crouched between them. Rougeina stares at Kompis across the lines, three of them between her and him.

ROUGEINA
I can't Swap to him. I can't Swap to anything.
P4CLOSE, Vigolas

looking from Kompis, to Mingus, to Smurjan alone in his box, to Drekk alone at the wheel, to the Bloom-marked crowd pressed against the light. Every one of them in a different box.

VIGOLASvery quietly
Nobody gets left on the wrong side of the rail.
ROUGEINA
What?
VIGOLAS
Something my first captain said.
P5ACTION.

He steps over the line and starts walking down the quay toward the pier, toward Veyra.

PAGE 3
P6CLOSE, Veyra

watching him come. Only her eyes move.

VEYRA
Walk, then.
P7CLOSE, a little frame

on a crate beside her, with Wendlan's face in it, and his splinted hand.

WENDLAN
Oh, let him. He'll be a while.
P8ACTION.

Vigolas's next step lands in a white frame that unfolds under his boot, and he steps out on the fortress roof, forty metres up, facing the sea.

VIGOLAS
…Hm.
PAGE 4
P9ACTION, a strip of panels.

He swings down off the roof by a flagpole and lands on the quay. He walks. A frame: he steps out on the Marka's main yard, hanging from it by one hand. He drops to the deck, crosses a line, jumps to the quay. He walks. A frame: he steps out knee-deep in a pen full of startled Bloom-marked fishermen.

VIGOLAS
Morning. Sorry. (climbs out)
P10CLOSE, Kompis

in the water, his grip on the frame's edge slipping, one finger at a time.

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P11CLOSE, Drekk

alone at the pinned Marka's wheel in his own little box of light. He can't see the frames. He's never been able to see them. But under the bell-rope mask, his head is tilting, the way it does at sea when he listens to the wind.

P12CLOSE, Drekk's hands

on the spokes, then lifting off them, fingers spread, feeling the air the way he feels a sail.

DREKKto himself
…They breathe.
P13WIDE.

Drekk roars down the harbour, his voice muffled by the mask and enormous anyway.

DREKK
CAPTAIN! STOP LOOKING WITH YOUR EYES!
DREKK
EVERY DOOR BREATHES! The air goes into them! FEEL YOUR NECK!
PAGE 6
P14CLOSE, Vigolas

stopped mid-step on the quay. A cold little breath of air tugs at the hairs on the back of his neck, pulling left. Toward nothing. Toward a door that hasn't opened yet.

P15CLOSE, Drekk

calling it like a helmsman calls a reef.

DREKK
That's a door on your left! Step right! Short! Now long! HARD RIGHT!
P16ACTION, a strip.

Vigolas walks blind, steered: two short steps, a long one, a hard right. A frame unfolds where his foot would have been and catches nothing. Another one opens and shuts on empty air. He's moving down the quay like a ship through a reef.

DREKK
Wait for the swell… wait… NOW.
PAGE 7
P17CUT. The Gate Yard.

Wendlan, frowning at his map-frame, drawing rectangles faster and faster, missing every time.

WENDLAN
…Who's steering him?
P18CLOSE, Smurjan

in his own box, third eye open. In his grey diagram-sight, each of Drekk's calls lands exactly where the next door is about to open.

SMURJANquiet, almost wondering
He's steering a man like a ship.
P19ACTION.

The white serpent rises off Veyra's shoulders and strikes. Vigolas throws up his forearm, and its crystal fangs sink in. He doesn't stop. He walks on with the serpent hanging off his arm.

VIGOLAS
Ow. Ow. Nope. Still walking.
PAGE 8
P20MID.

Vigolas steps over the little ring around Veyra's feet, the last line, and stands face to face with her on the pier. The serpent drops off his bleeding arm and coils back up her leg.

P21POV, Greed-sight.

The head of the stake under her crystal gauntlets burns gold, the most valuable thing in the harbour.

P22ACTION.

He grabs it with both hands and heaves. It doesn't budge. Her crystal has grown into the stone, and her gauntlets are locked around it.

VEYRA
You can't pull my nail, pirate.
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P23CLOSE, Vigolas

letting go of the stake. He looks at her, at the crystal armour, at the eyes that are the only part of her that can move.

VIGOLAS
…No.

He lays his open palm flat on her crystal breastplate.

VIGOLAS
Then I'll take what drove it.
P24CLOSE, his chest.

Deep inside, behind the ribs, the old voice that is his and not his.

VOICEjagged balloon
Then say the third one.
P25CLOSE, his knuckles.

Black-green script crawls across them, letter by letter.

The Black Soul commands. Each one he gets back takes something he loved.
P26INSET, memory.

The rainy dock. The huge tarred hands tying red sailcloth into a six-year-old's hair. The broad woman with grey braids, the gap in her teeth, the laughing walnut face—

—and as we look, the face washes out. Like a sail left too long in the sun, it fades to blank salt-white. The lines go, then the grin, then the eyes. The braids stay. The hands stay. The voice stays.

HILDa face of nothing
There. Now you're crew.
PAGES 10–11 — SPLASH
P27SPLASH (double page). REMOVE.
VIGOLAS
REMOVE.

Out of Veyra's chest, through Vigolas's palm, comes a knot of white light, pulled out like a thread off a spool, and his fist closes on it. Green lightning and black-green script climb his arm to the shoulder.

And across the whole Weir, at the same instant, every line snaps. They go like harp strings cut with a knife, TWANG TWANG TWANG TWANG, bursting into showers of white sparks: the lines across the quay, the lines over the water, the pens, the line through the Marka's hull. The ship lurches free and rocks for the first time in an hour. The Bloom-marked crowd pours out of the broken pens. Rougeina is already mid-Swap, a silver-rose streak. And in the water, Mingus is suddenly swimming through nothing at all.

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P28ACTION.

Rougeina Swaps with a floating crate beside Kompis, blink, and her blade cuts the chain of light in one stroke.

ROUGEINA
Absent without leave, my foot.
P29ACTION.

Mingus reaches Kompis and Kompis grabs him round the neck. Along the panel border the golden pulse line roars back, ba-DUM, ba-DUM. Kompis's eyes go grey, then clear, and Lilla Ulv fires: the wolf cub runs one tight circle round the water-frame and bonks its hinge. It snaps shut on nothing.

KRAK
P30CUT, the Gate Yard.

snap. Wendlan's left ring finger.

WENDLAN
Oh, come ON—
PAGE 13
P31CLOSE, Veyra.

The crystal spurs around her greaves unlock from the stone with a sound like ice breaking on a lake. Her gauntlets come off the stake. For the first time in the fight, she moves. She takes one step, unsteady, and looks down at her own feet as if they belong to someone else.

P32ACTION.

Then she's a K-IV warden in crystal armour again, and she drives a crystal fist at Vigolas's head. He takes it on the shoulder and staggers. His right fist stays shut, black-green smoke curling out between the fingers.

P33ACTION.

He fights her one-handed, left hook, block, duck, his right fist held tight against his chest like a man carrying a hot coal.

VIGOLAS
It's hot! It's really, really hot!
TROLLMAGEfrom the quay
You're holding her Threshold! Don't open your hand!
VIGOLAS
I wasn't going to!
PAGE 14
P34WIDE, the quay.

The Bloom-marked flood out of the broken pens in a shower of seven colours, frightened people with new sins sparking off them like fireworks, a stampede for the boats. The Sentinels can't hold them. In the chaos, the crew scrambles back toward the Marka.

P35KOMPIS'S POV, from the water

Mingus paddling beside him. Across the harbour the little fishing girl runs, nothing between her and the far pen any more, straight into her mother's arms. The gold thread between them snaps tight and bright, a short gold line now, from one heart to the other.

KOMPISquietly
…There you go.
PAGE 15
P36CUT. The Gate Yard.

Wendlan, three fingers and a wrist splinted, draws one rectangle, fast.

WENDLAN
Veyra. Out.
P37ACTION, the pier.

A frame unfolds behind Veyra. She looks at Vigolas, at his smoking fist, one long look. Then she steps backwards through the frame and is gone, the serpent pouring in after her. The frame folds shut. Her stake is left standing in the pier: just white iron now.

P38WIDE.

All over the Weir, the frames fold away into nothing. The Marka swings free under Drekk's hands, sails filling. The crew leaps aboard from the quay. Kompis and Mingus are hauled up dripping over the rail by Smurjan.

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P39WIDE, the channel.

The Marka races out between the black rocks into the open Current, Bloom-marked boats scattering out of the Weir all around her like a flock.

P40MID, the bow.

Vigolas sits on the deck with his back against the rail, his right fist clenched against his chest, smoke still curling out of it. Kompis kneels beside him with his hand on Mingus's ribs, counting along the golden pulse line.

KOMPIS
…fifty-seven… fifty-eight… fifty-nine…
KOMPIS
Sixty.
P41ACTION.

Vigolas's fist tears open by itself. The white knot rips out of his palm and streaks away across the sky like a shooting star, toward the far white peak of Glasheim, home to its owner. His palm is blistered and scorched black-green.

VIGOLAS
AH— hah. …Ow.
PAGE 17 — THE HOOK
P42CLOSE, Trollmage

scribbling the rules in the margin of his Codex.

TROLLMAGE
Sixty heartbeats, then it goes home.
VIGOLASblowing on his palm
One thing. One person. I have to touch them. A minute. And it bites.
TROLLMAGE
And you couldn't say another command while you held it?
VIGOLAS
Not a word. Hand's full.
P43MID, the bow, later.

The crew gone below. Drekk sits down next to Vigolas against the rail, the bell-rope mask turned toward the sea.

DREKK
Good walking, captain.
VIGOLAS
Good steering.
DREKK
Your old captain. The walnut. She'd have liked that walk.
P44CLOSE, Vigolas

his fingers going to the faded red sailcloth in his braid, smiling.

VIGOLAS
She'd have loved it. She'd have laughed with that big face of hers, all scrunched up, like a…
VIGOLAS
…like…
P45FINAL PANEL, close on Vigolas.

The smile stays on his mouth a moment longer than it should. He's holding the red scrap. He's looking for her, and there's only sun on a sail.

VIGOLASvery quietly
…I can hear her. I can't see her.
END OF CHAPTER 90

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